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[fics_by_maple]

For harryron100

Title: Bad Ron
Prompt:False
Rating:PG-13
Word Count:100
Category/Warnings:
A/N: Just playing with a naughty Ron. Gah! - I forgot how hard 100 words is!



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Merlin, I knew it was bad.

I ran my hand over my hair as the fit new secretary laughed at my joke.

Perfect.

A shadow fell over us and his laugh died instantly.

I felt the presence behind me but didn’t turn around.

“Pardon me,” I said, and made my way to the gents. The presence looming behind me every step.

Once inside I turned to face Harry’s jealous green eyes.

“Do you have,” he backed me against the wall, “the false impression that I’m ok with you flirting?”

I shook my head and Harry dropped to his knees.

Perfect.

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Comments

[plotbunniofdoom]

I felt the presence behind me but didn’t turn around.

*guh*

I love it.

Perfect.

Exactly.

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

It was 300 words! Cutting it down to 100 kinda took the sexy fun out of it, I think.

But thank you!

[oncelikeshari.livejournal.com]

Yay drabbling Maple!

And I love jealous Harry being all forceful *grins*

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

:D I had more naughty Ron flirting, but I had to cut it! 100 words!

[magicofisis.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was fun! I do love jealous!Harry.

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

I have a penchant for him/them myself. The problem is that in order to have one being jealous you have to have one of them [potentially] doing something wrong to warrant it, and nobody has the heart to write it! :P

[hedwigs-bane.livejournal.com]

Yeah, now we know why Harry's eyes are green, eh? Maybe the extra 200 words could be part of a series, yes? I'd love to know what happens next...

May I suggest one little edit? It's just that it was first person all the way until Ron shook his head and Harry dropped to his knees. Maybe it should be "I shook my head and Harry dropped to his knees". Sorry, but I couldn't help myself...

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

Oh, of course! I changed pov half way through and didn't catch it. Good one.

[hedwigs-bane.livejournal.com]

*wipes sweaty brow* Whew! I'm just glad you didn't mind my kibitzing.

:-)

[roelliej.livejournal.com]

Love it all the time when Harry drops to his knees ;).
Great job!

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

*giggles* What better way to remind Ron he belongs to you, eh?

[shocolate.livejournal.com]

*flails*

ridiculously hot for pg-13 in 100 words!

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

Hee - well it was hotter when it was 300 words, but I had to chop it up. :P

[nakeefeet.livejournal.com]

Perfect, yes.

Love jealous!Harry.

Hard to believe you packed all that hotness into 100 words.

Well done!

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

Why thank you! I wanted more adorable flirting Ron and angry jealous Harry but a drabble is just a 'peek'. :)

[ms-worplesdon.livejournal.com]

Yummy as hell! :D

Lunch time blow jobs. Guh.

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

*g*

I would watch them during my lunch. uh-huh

[for-a-fantasy.livejournal.com]

SEXY.

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

Thank yeh muchly! :)

[lnalvgd.livejournal.com]

Oooooooooooooh!

Jealous!Harry!is!sexy!down!on!his!knees!proper!like!!!

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

hee - I figured on!his!knees! would be the best way to stake his claim. :P

[tailoredshirt.livejournal.com]

Haha! Ron's so clever, isn't he? He knows just how to play him.

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

Hee - I had more about how guilty Ron felt but how it was SO worth it! :P

Thanks!

[candycane7.livejournal.com]

Oooh!

Jealous!Harry = hot

*nods*

Perfect.

Indeed.

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

oh, cool! Thanks!

I like when one gets all possessive of the other. *g*

[mrsquizzical.livejournal.com]

yoikes!

where did that come from?

mmmmmHMMMMM!

[mrsquizzical.livejournal.com]

ooh! i wanna read the full 300 words!

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

Where did what come from?

*blinks*

I broke my rule and didn't save the '300 words' - but deleted, darn it.

[hpuckle.livejournal.com]

Squeee! I love it when one of them is jealous!

xxx

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

Hee - I have a penchant for that, too! :P

Thanks!

[lonelyflutterby.livejournal.com]

Holy hotness, Batman! GUH!

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

Heh - I wasn't sure it would be hot at all - cool! Thanks!

[foretinterdite.livejournal.com]

I love how you let Harry's presence loom, and back Ron against the wall, displaying his intensity in spite of the disparity in their statures.

[fics-by-maple.livejournal.com]

:P

I was thinking about their height difference when I imagined it. *sigh* I love them.

Thanks!