Yeah, now we know why Harry's eyes are green, eh? Maybe the extra 200 words could be part of a series, yes? I'd love to know what happens next...
May I suggest one little edit? It's just that it was first person all the way until Ron shook his head and Harry dropped to his knees. Maybe it should be "I shook my head and Harry dropped to his knees". Sorry, but I couldn't help myself...
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Date: 2007-11-20 11:45 pm (UTC)May I suggest one little edit? It's just that it was first person all the way until Ron shook his head and Harry dropped to his knees. Maybe it should be "I shook my head and Harry dropped to his knees". Sorry, but I couldn't help myself...