fics_by_maple: (Harry/Ron kiss)
fics_by_maple ([personal profile] fics_by_maple) wrote2008-04-27 03:24 pm

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Title: One Of The Family
Pairing: Bill/Charlie-ish, Harry/Ron (with past Harry/Charlie and present Bill/Fleur)
Word Count: 2483
Rating: NC-17
Summary:Charlie can't understand Bill's life, and they both see something they shouldn't.
Warnings: Mild Weasleycest, voyeurism.
A/N: With beta help from [livejournal.com profile] mrsquizzical, [livejournal.com profile] lnalvgd and [livejournal.com profile] abigail89.
Written for [livejournal.com profile] violet_quill's HP Superslash Challenge - of the three scary pairings I was assigned, Bill/Charlie was the best I could do - and I totally hide it with harry/ron!


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"I figured he was already naked anyway so why not, right?" Charlie said as he and Bill escaped the crowded interior of Shell Cottage, the story of his recent escapade not being suitable family dinner conversation.

"What did he do?" Bill asked over the distant sound of crushing waves.

Rounding the corner of the cottage, they unexpectedly found Ron who clearly hadn't heard them coming. He was leaning his forehead against the wall, fists on either side of his head.

"Oi – what's the matter with you?" Charlie asked causing Ron to jump.

"N-nothing. I – what?" Ron's voice was thick and he turned away to wipe at his nose.

"What's happened?" Bill asked, going to him.

Ron let out a shaky dispirited laugh. "Nothing. Not a bloody thing has happened."

"Ah," Bill said in a sympathetic tone.

"What are we talking about?" Charlie asked.

Bill let out a tiny huff. "Harry, of course."

"Oh? … Oh Harry. Really? I didn't even know you were a bender."

Ron slumped against the wall with a groan.

Bill gave Charlie a wide-eyed look of annoyance, and Charlie returned a wide-eyed look of virtue.

"Look, I think it's great," Charlie started, in an attempt to offer their youngest brother some comfort. "The little hero is pretty fit, I don't blame you. And he's definitely up for it, I can attest to that myself."

"You what?" Ron and Bill both exclaimed.

"You - with Harry? - With my Harry?" Ron stammered between gulping breaths.

"No one ever told me he was your Harry."

"Charlie, you didn't," Bill scolded.

"Oh, god …" Ron went pale.

"Well look, we didn't actually fuck or anything," Charlie tried to amend.

"Oh, god …" Ron's voice went up and he swayed on his feet.

"Alright, down you go," Bill said, putting a hand on the back of Ron's neck and shoving his head down between his knees before Ron blacked out. "Will you just stop talking," he grumbled at Charlie.

"I'm sorry! Harry never said – well, ok, neither of us said much, our mouths being full and all."

Ron let out a whimper.

Bill waved a hand at Charlie to shut up, before turning back to Ron with a gentler tone.

"Never mind him. You need to be honest with Harry, and with yourself. It's time to tell him how you feel."

"For cryin' in a well, why don't you give him flowers and recite a sonnet while you're at it," Charlie mocked and peered around Bill, leaning down to Ron. "Forget Billy's romantic muck. If you want the boy, grab him by the back of the neck, snog him breathless, tell him you're gonna suck his cock and get on your knees." Charlie wobbled his head blithely and shrugged. "Or push him onto his knees to suck your cock, either-or."

Ron groaned. "Will you please stop saying 'cock'?"

"You're not helping, shush!" Bill chided Charlie while rubbing up and down between Ron's shoulder blades. "He really loves Harry, don't you know that?"

"Wh - how could I know that?"

"You might if you were around more often," Bill muttered.

"Now don't go all Mum on me," Charlie said defensively.

Ron took a gulping wheeze as he shook with anxiety.

"Easy does it," Bill soothed and then turned to scold Charlie. "Even if you didn't know – Harry's practically one of the family!"

Charlie gave him a lurid grin and lowered his voice. "That wouldn't stop me."

Bill opened his mouth, glanced down at Ron, and then shut his mouth with a scowl.

Charlie's face remained alight with a cocky smile, but his face fell with frustrated regret when he looked down at Ron and he rubbed his forehead with his knuckles.

"Bloody hell, little brother, I didn't know you were all dreamy over him."

"I'm not," Ron said petulantly to the ground. Then he stood up with a deep breath and looked defiantly at Charlie. "You keep away from him."

"Alright, then, whatever," Charlie chuckled, holding his palms up in resignation. "Go claim your man. I won't get in the way."

"He is right about that, at least. It's time to do something about it," Bill said quietly.

Ron took a deep breath, tore himself from a glare at Charlie.

"What do I say?" he asked.

"Doesn't matter what you say. Just do it." Bill put a bolstering hand on Ron's shoulder.

"Yeah, that's right," Charlie said, deflecting a warning glare from Bill. "Do as Bill says. He knows what he's talking about, right?"

Ron nodded, and with his face set and determined, he made off toward the house with all the fortitude of a man going to the gallows.

Bill leaned against the wall with a wistful smile, shaking his head.

"You're a filthy hypocrite, you know that?" Charlie said as he leaned on the wall next to him.

"Excuse me?" Bill's eyebrows shot up.

"You heard me. All that rubbish; 'you have to tell him how you feel, Ron. Be true to yourself'. – Hypocrite."

Bill looked at him with mild incredulity, then stretched his neck side to side, a patience gathering mannerism he often resorted to when talking with Charlie.

"I wasn't being hypocritical. I really believe what I told him."

Charlie snorted. "Oh, yes I'm sure you do. Just like you can honestly tell me Fleur gives you everything you need."

"We've been through this before. It's not the same for me as it for you."

"So you've said. You're telling me honestly that you're gonna go the rest of your life without touching another man?"

"Yes."

Charlie made a derogatory sounding snuffle like a dragon about to sneeze.

"I love her."

"Yeah, sure. Only you had to marry an exceptionally beautiful woman to convince yourself you can be straight."

"I …" Bill sighed. "I never told her I was straight. She knows exactly what I am."

"Confused."

"Open minded."

"Oh, come on. You just needed a woman to complete the picture; Head Boy becomes a banker and marries a pretty girl to make little Prefects with."

"Don't call me a banker," Bill said, flicking his wand which emitted a small, sparkling image of dragon breathing fire. "Fleur knows all about my history with men, there's no denying it. I'm just committed to her."

Charlie drew his wand and parried quickly, casting his own dragon to defend himself with. "You're depriving yourself."

"I'm not. You might understand if you spent more time with people than you do with those bloody lizards."

"Lizards? Oh, you're begging for a fight now, mate." Charlie escalated the wizard's duel, by charming a nearby vine to curl up around Bill's leg while maintaining the mid air battle between dragons. "You think you can ignore the beast within, big brother? That you can beat it into submission?"

Bill deflected the growing vine, sending it to grow into spikes around Charlie's feet while his conjured dragon dived in attack.

"You don't seem to understand that I haven't got a 'beast within'."

"And you're denying what the animal in you needs." Charlie swirled his wand and his dragon stopped fighting, turned around and raised its tail in the air presenting itself to Bill's dragon.

"You little shit," Bill huffed with a chuckle, contemplating letting his dragon take advantage of the other one.

The sound of the back door slamming interrupted them.

"That's not fair! I haven't done anything wrong!" Harry's voice snapped.

Bill and Charlie met each other's eyes and without saying a word, banished all traces of their duel and listened.

" - you could have said something - anything!" Ron shouted. Both he and Harry were getting closer.

"How exactly does one bring that up? I'm sorry, Ron, but I think your sister has an acute lack of prick for my preferences. Is that what you wanted to hear?"

"I think I've earned your honesty! And keep your voice down."

The sound of their shouting voices suddenly stopped and Bill and Charlie moved together, nearing the corner of the house trying to hear them.

Peeking through the vine-covered lattice, they could see Harry and Ron still arguing but their voices were muffled.

"Secrecy charm," Bill whispered.

Charlie nodded and then leapt back as Harry had turned and stormed away so that he was about to come right around the wall dividing the two sets of men. Bill shuffled away, shooing his arms at Charlie, compelled by some unexplainable desire not to let it be known that he and Charlie had heard any of the argument. Charlie stumbled over a protruding taproot, causing Bill to bump into him and they clutched each other to keep from falling. Bill cast a Disillusionment Charm over the two of them just as Harry came around the corner.

They turned and froze where they stood, and if Harry hadn't been embroiled in ardent conflict he would certainly have seen them.

"Pretty quick work," Charlie praised in a whisper, putting his hands on Bill's waist. "For a banker."

Harry uttered what looked like a well enunciated 'fuck off' and turned again, but Ron grabbed him in the curve of the elbow and pulled Harry back to him. He cupped the back of Harry's head with his other hand and pulled him up into a kiss.

"'atta boy," Charlie muttered, resting his chin on Bill's shoulder.

Harry shoved Ron with an angry look, but kept a handful of his shirtfront and then just as quickly pulled him close again. Bill and Charlie both tensed, holding their breath as Harry spoke with a pleading look at Ron. They couldn't see their little brother's face, but Harry's expression softened and his whole countenance crumpled as Ron pulled him into hug.

"We shouldn't be seeing this," Bill whispered.

Charlie's arms slid around Bill's middle, hugging him from behind. "Thought you liked romance."

Ron's hand slid up to the back of Harry's head again, but gently this time. Harry raised his chin and said something before moving up for a very tentative kiss.

Charlie and Bill both relaxed into each other, letting out the breath they'd been holding.

"Would you look at that…?" Charlie said. "Tell me true; you can't really mean to go without that for the rest of your life."

"Please, don't start again."

Harry's hands slowly encircled Ron's waist, touching with light fingertips at first, gradually opening his palms to rub circles on Ron's back.

"We really should leave. Or let them know we're here."

"We're not going anywhere, and you know it. Look how those boys touch each other. They're being good now, but it's not gonna last."

"That's love, Charlie, can't you see that? They're not going to suck each off other in my garden after their first kiss."

"Maybe not … but you'd still want to watch if they did."

Bill elbowed Charlie square in the solar-plexus, which would have doubled over any other man, but Charlie merely emitted a low whuff and gripped Bill even harder.

"Be still now, or you'll interrupt the young lovers," Charlie whispered, his hot breath on the skin below Bill's earlobe.

Harry and Ron were cheek to cheek, making tiny movements nuzzling each other. As they talked, their hands roamed up and down the other's back and then for the first time, broke into hushed laughter.

Bill crossed his arms over Charlie's that were wrapped around his torso, he was smiling to himself at the sweetness of the exchange in front of them. Charlie squeezed him a little tighter.

Ron began kissing Harry again, they could only see over the back of his shoulder and over his left arm where he'd pulled Harry close, his large hand slipping down to grip Harry's arse. The motion seemed to break something in Harry and he dropped all timid pretenses. He arched into Ron, and lolled his head back, allowing Ron to suck on the line of his jaw and throat.

"Merlin …" Bill gasped at the sight.

"Uh-huh," Charlie agreed. "Harry's like a rutting buck in heat, he wants it. Can't you just see yourself in Ron's place? When's the last time you had a boy like that?"

Bill looked at Harry's parted lips and remembered the echo of a young man's pleas in the language of a far off land. The touch of his dark skin had been damp from the desert night heat.

"Can you remember what it was like to have a boy underneath you? On top? Behind?" Charlie pressed his hips forward. "You never going to think of that again?"

"Never said I wouldn’t think of it," Bill muttered, tilting his head back while Ron and Harry seemed to meld even closer. "Just that I'd be faithful."

Charlie's hand slid down Bill's hip, crossed over his groin and cupped the swollen bulge in his trousers.

Bill's breath hitched and he caught Charlie's wrist in an attempt to pull it away, but the move affected nothing more than a lingering grope.

Just as Ron's hand reached inside Harry's trousers, Charlie grasped Bill's fly and pulled outward, letting his cock spring free of its trapping, and standing upright as it surged with blood inside of his pants.

"That's better," Charlie soothed, only a trace of mocking in his voice.

"Godric, will you stop?" Bill hissed through clenched teeth, even as he pressed forward into Charlie's palm.

"'m just helping."

Harry's trousers were open and they could just make out Ron's hand pulling on him through the darkness. The clouds parted and moonlight lit up Harry's beautifically anguished expression as he clung to Ron, his face resting against his bicep.

"Look how they touch each other – I know just what Ron's feeling in the palm of his hand. And he tastes like a boy who's been flying all day. You remember what that tastes like?"

"Shit," Bill hissed, feeling himself conflicted with different emotions as Charlie's hand squeezed him through the fabric, knowing by Harry's hiccupping breaths that Ron's strokes nearly had him. "… She loves me, Charlie."

"But I love you, too..." His brother's mouth moved against the skin on his neck as he spoke.

Harry gripped Ron's arm, fingers digging into lean flesh as he convulsed and came. Bill shuddered with a sympathetic pang of lust.

"Don't you wish you could smell it?" Charlie whispered, nuzzling him.

Bill took a deep breath and finally stilled Charlie's hand as they watched Ron right Harry's clothes. They kissed and whispered to each other, and Bill hoped they were making promises that they could keep.

When they left, Bill quickly ended the charms that were concealing them and faced his brother.

"I won't do this," he said, taking Charlie's face into his hands. "But you …" Bill patted Charlie's cheek roughly. "You'll always be my first love."

He kissed Charlie on the lips, hugged him tightly, and walked away taking a deep breath, willing the ocean air to keep him honest.

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[identity profile] iamshadow.livejournal.com 2008-04-27 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
*flails*

Oh...oh...oh...

*is incoherent*

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 12:34 am (UTC)(link)
*grins*

I suppose that's good? :)

[identity profile] shocolate.livejournal.com 2008-04-27 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
"The little hero is pretty fit, I don't blame you. And he's definitely up for it, I can attest to that myself."

Oh my gosh!

"No one ever told me he was your Harry."

*snort*

Can't he see? Isn't it obvious?

putting a hand on the back of Ron's neck and shoving his head down

This is a very good out of context quote...

Charlie drew his wand and parried quickly, casting his own dragon to defend himself with

oooh!

his dragon stopped fighting, turned around and raised its tail in the air presenting itself to Bill's dragon

*screams*

Harry and Ron were cheek to cheek, making tiny movements nuzzling each other.

*sighs*

moonlight lit up Harry's beautifically anguished expression as he clung to Ron, his face resting against his bicep

This is so beautiful!

...aaaaaaaaaaand pretty well coped with, Weasleycest-wise...

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
*fails at Weasleycest*

Every time I write Charlie he's a clueless arse, he might not know who Harry belongs to.

Thanks!

[identity profile] jadzialove.livejournal.com 2008-04-27 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmmmmm. Delicious.

I have to write Weaselycest for a fest and I'm a bit terrified that I bit off more than I can chew, so to speak. You did marvelously! I hope I do half as well.

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Oh, good luck! What's the pairing? Yeah, I just couldn't bring myself to go all the way with them.

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[identity profile] hpuckle.livejournal.com 2008-04-27 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
*flails a very lot*

This was perfect. Perfect.

Charlie and his no-nonsense approach to the Ron/Harry situation was very much how I see Charlie, and I loved seeing Bill being the older, slightly more sensible one.

Loved this! Very worth the wait!

xxx

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, hee - yay!

I really do love Charlie, but in my fics he always gets relegated to the arrogant arsehole, poor guy.

Thank you!

[identity profile] tray-la-la.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
*is ded*

guh! harry and ron were so sweet, while bill and charlie were so hot!

i know you said this was a scary pairing for you, but i think you did marvelously and wouldn't mind one bit if charlie and bill got a little dishonest sometime in the future! *gives you puppy dog eyes*

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
Yay - I'm so glad you liked it.

It is! I will totally read a very dishonest Bill/Charlie written by a good writer, but I just can't make it happen with my own pen. *sighs*

[identity profile] innibis.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
God, I've needed some Harry/Ron lately. It was so good to see them, even if they are not entirely the point of the story.

I totally agree on your take. . . Bill strikes me as an experimental kind of guy, but a loyal one who loves his wife and wouldn't cheat on her.

This has a beautiful little taste of regret in it that I love. Leaves you smiling, but with an ache.

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
I know! Me, too! We need more H/R - and good long, plotty, smutty stuff, too. *sigh*

Bill would do the right thing even if it killed him, I think.

I loved your last comment - thank you!
ext_6368: cherry blossoms on a tree -- with my fandom name "EntreNous" on it (hp: harry/ron imagine kissing)

[identity profile] entrenous88.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, to Ron being so unsure and bumbling, and getting advice from his brothers!

Naughty Charlie. :D Who knew he'd gotten to Harry first? But of course Harry loved Ron the whole time, yes.

I actually sympathized with Bill here, being honest with Fleur, and for the most part moving to maintain his promise. There's something bittersweet about Charlie being his first love, but it does seem like their time together is at an end.

And for Harry and Ron, everything is only beginning. :) Nice parallels and contrasts between the two relationships.

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Heh - I think a horny Charlie would get just about whatever interested him - including Harry! :P

I like the way you saw it with parallels and contrasts - very cool!

Thanks so much for reading!

[identity profile] nakeefeet.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! You did a wonderful job with the pairing! We've needed some Harry/Ron round here and you've provided it beautifully, even if they're not the 'main pairing'.

I have to agree with several people above: I can see Bill being experimental, but I can't see him cheaing on his wife.

Well done!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
We need more H/R! *nods*

Yes, I like the idea of Bill being 'Open minded'. :P

Thanks so much for reading!

[identity profile] hardticket.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 04:25 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my, Harry/Ron and Bill/Charlie...


*is impressed*


Opened minded Bill and Horny Charlie are always a good combination. :D

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, thanks! Open minded Bill just seems like canon to me!

*pats horny Pooh*

[identity profile] hpaa.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
That was awesome.. Fabulous job with Bill and Charlie...

I really wish we had seen more of Charlie in canon, he seemed like an interesting character... Thank God we have fanon!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Whew - thanks so much. Yes, Charlie was notably not present, even in DH. I really wonder what his story is.

I always make him into an arsehole! :p

[identity profile] mcmuffins-js.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 12:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh WOW, brilliant characterizations, and oh, the Ron/Harry! I loves this :) And I love love love best Bill's last bit - he stayed faithful! He loves his brother! I'm not a weasleycest fan either, and I think you handled this brilliantly :)

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww - thank you! *bounces* I was hoping to find the right balance for them. *fails at Weasleycest* :P

[identity profile] cyclonejuliet.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 12:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh dear god in heaven....that was wonderful in so many ways. Why on earth did you fret so much about this fic?
"Now don't go all Mum on me," Charlie said defensively.
great line

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you!

I fret about nearly everything I write. Especially when I write ships that are all mixed up and vague - but they do tend to be my favorites.

*hugs*

[identity profile] mrsquizzical.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 01:02 pm (UTC)(link)
bill keeps trying to make me fall in love with him. make him stop.



[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I owe so much to Matt for creating such a sexy Bill, you can't help but think of him whenever you read about Bill now.

*hugs*

[identity profile] lnalvgd.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 05:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Charlie is such an arse...

But a lovable one!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
He IS! Some people write such a sweet, woobie Charlie, and I always make him such an arse!

*hugs*

[identity profile] emiime.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, Maple, this is so sexy! The voyeurism is killer, and the ending absolutely breaks my heart, but it's perfect. Ohhhh, sweet Weasley love! ♥

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! *bounces*

I haven't done much with voyeurism before, that was new for me. ... And the whole brotherly love thing. Hee - thanks so much! ♥

[identity profile] love-tart.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my sweet Merlin.

That was...that was...Undefinable. I have no words. Absolutely gorgeous.

Dare I hope that you will someday tell us Ron and Harry's side? They were brilliant here, even though they weren't the feature presentation. LoL.

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles* Aww - thank you!

Oh, dear, probably not. But I will be writing other things. Thank you!

[identity profile] brumeux77.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my. That was good. I'm still struggling with my best-of-three pairing for Violet.

Thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!

I know, it's weird to get pushed out of our comfort zone - of course I just made it Harry/Ron, too, so I wouldn't be so scared.

[identity profile] ceirdwenfc.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Here's the problem with never - like I never read slash/I never read weasleycest, but here I am because this was recommended. I loved how this went back and forth between the H/R part and the B/C part. You could feel the voyeurism and their whispering on the breezes. It was also nice for Bill to acknowledge Charlie, but still be faithful to the one he chose for whatever reason he chose her. A lot of people live like this. At the end, you could really feel his sadness at saying goodbye, not just to the lifestyle, but what he had with Charlie.

"Now don't go all Mum on me," Charlie said defensively. - my favorite line - I laughed out loud. I could hear his voice. Actually, I could hear all of their voices as they spoke, which is not always easy to convey. And Ron getting all dizzy and almost passing out, the witty banter. Just really well done.
Sorry this is so long, but thanks for an enjoyable fic.

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
Sorry I'm late on responding - but I really enjoyed your comments.

Thanks for giving it a chance even though it wasn't your usual thing. The weasleycest is really unusual for me, too!

I'd never tried the back and forth between two points of action before, I'm really glad that worked for you.

I appreciate it!

[identity profile] juxtaposefantsy.livejournal.com 2008-04-28 09:20 pm (UTC)(link)
That was really good. Not only sexy, but emotional. I liked your choice of pov, too. A nice twist that was very effective. Great job!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
Sorry I'm late here, but thank you very much! I'm glad the POV worked for you. :)
plotbunniofdoom: (Harry/Ron: I need you like a seeker need)

[personal profile] plotbunniofdoom 2008-04-29 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
Oh *guh* very hot and naughty.

I like that it leaves you wanting more. :-)

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
I'm very late on this - but thank you! I'm so glad you read it. :)

[identity profile] esporamor.livejournal.com 2008-04-29 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
"That's not fair! I haven't done anything wrong!" Harry's voice snapped.
Figures, I just knew that Ron was going to demand an explanation!

Bill and Charlie both tensed, holding their breath as Harry spoke with a pleading look at Ron. They couldn't see their little brother's face, but Harry's expression softened and his whole countenance crumpled as Ron pulled him into hug.
Awww, of course me as a very nosy person wishes to know what he said to Ron, but I can make hundreds of little scenarios.

Harry and Ron were cheek to cheek, making tiny movements nuzzling each other.
Most lovely image ever!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
Sorry I'm so late with a response, but thank you for reading!

Awww, of course me as a very nosy person wishes to know what he said to Ron, but I can make hundreds of little scenarios.
That's actually kinda cool, because that's a part of the whole voyeurism thing. *g*

[identity profile] kaalee.livejournal.com 2008-04-29 09:58 am (UTC)(link)
I so rarely read Bill/Charlie, but because it was you and because you mentioned wibbling about it (I totally understand!), I decided to read it! ♥ I love seeing a story told via another perspective -- it's a clever story telling device and when done well, I always find it very satisfying. Well done!!!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
I'm sorry I'm so late with my response here.

Thank you for giving this a chance, in spite of it not being your usual thing. Yeah, it's kind of scary trying to write something new, but once done, kinda of exciting, too.

Hope you are well! ♥

[identity profile] owens-mom.livejournal.com 2008-04-29 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow! Yay, loved that. Yes indeedy... :D

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
A little late now, but thanks so much for reading! :)

[identity profile] unomesowell.livejournal.com 2008-04-30 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Only for you will I read Weasleycest because only you will let me look the other way and pretend I am really enjoying the other pretty boys in the yard.

I assure you I am going to hell anyway because I totally sent this to my sister who will probably poke my eyes out for me.

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
I'm behind here, but thank you!

*g* I know I don't have many Weasleycest readers, but I tried to keep it light.

[identity profile] matildabishop.livejournal.com 2008-04-30 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
oh this is love!!!! all the boys i love loving each other! and all so clever and funny and hot! i love it!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
Sorry I'm a bit late with my reply here.

*bounces* Thank you so much for reading. It was sort of new and scary to write so I'm really glad you liked it.

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