fics_by_maple: (George/Lee)
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For my [livejournal.com profile] 50_smutlets claim, that belongs in my Within You, Without You universe.

Title: The Glass Onion
Pairing: George/Lee
Word Count: 659
Rating: NC-17
My Table



38. Virgin
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“All right, love. Slowly then.” Lee began to rock their bodies together, only pulling out a small amount and sliding back into him slowly. Funny that after all these months of having sex together, George was losing his virginity in a new way tonight.

“You feel amazing. So sexy,” Lee praised.

George turned his head back and awkwardly managed to kiss him. He needed this. Lee had become his teacher about so much in life. He taught him about friendship outside of the bonds he had with his family and his brothers. Lee inspired him to love outside of that safe circle he had been born into. He truly felt safe with Lee’s arms around him and his body inside of him.

He belonged here.

“Oh fuck!” he shouted, in a way that was more ‘what the?’ than ‘me harder!’. Something felt like it was burning up and melting deep on the inside. He arched and clenched and grasped at Lee’s thigh.

“That feels good, right?” Lee asked, his thrusts still slow and even. “That’s the magic spot, you always find it for me.”

“Oh, Merlin. … This is what you feel?”

“Mmhmm – and I love it.” Lee kissed him behind the ear and along the top of his shoulder. “Give me your hand, Georgie. I can’t do it.” George felt some sympathy for Lee admitting his weaknesses in the middle of sex.

“Quickly, babe. I won’t last much longer.” Lee’s normally composed voice sounded deep and primal, and his actions became so as well. He was no longer stroking gentle circles over George’s body, but gripped his hip to steady himself. The weight of Lee’s forehead became heavier on the back of his shoulder as he thrust harder.

“Unngh!” George grunted, his hand flying up and down his cock, as Lee wracked his body with several more rough thrusts. George felt the spinning-sinking-falling. “I’m gonna come!” he warned, and erupt he did. Never had he felt the force of climax rush through him as powerfully as it did while being fucked.

“Yes. … Yes.” Lee was sputtering with his own impending orgasm. George arched his back and Lee plunged into him one last time, coming with a relieved sounding whimper.

Together they regained their breathing and relaxed into each other. George shuddered as his body naturally expelled the softening cock from inside of him, but Lee kept his body nestled firmly behind George, enveloping him in a hug and tender kisses.

“I love you, George,” Lee uttered. “Thank you,”

George’s attention was shot. He was exhausted between the remnants of a crying headache and the enticing, despoiled feeling in his well-fucked arse. The thought made him smile and nearly gave him the giggles as a final tension release.

But he felt Lee’s necklace pressing on the back of his shoulder, thinking of Byron Burke, and then of Lee.

It always came back to Lee.

George pulled the strong, dark arm across his chest and hung onto him, his constant in life. He thought of his brothers, what would they think? … Fuck them. And Fred?

Fred.

George had been in a fight tonight. For the time in his life, Fred was neither present, nor the first person George had gone to.

“What time is it?” George asked suddenly, sitting up and reaching for a pair of shorts on the floor.

“It’s late. Wait, Georgie, don’t get out of bed. I want to lay here with you.”

“I know, I’m sorry. Fred will have just found out. He’ll be here soon.”

“You really think so?”

“Yeah. You might want to get dressed, too,” George answered, hastily stepping into his shorts.

Lee looked exasperated. “Well, surely he’ll knock on the door first?”

His assumption was corrected however, as a faint crack was heard downstairs and then the other twin’s voice rang out.

“Sorry.” George said, seeing the tight-lipped annoyance on Lee’s face and then went downstairs to meet his brother.

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Date: 2007-09-05 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpaa.livejournal.com
Aw poor George, he hurts so much... (er... I meant emotionally ;))

I am a little muddled with the timeline though, I though Fred knew about them, I need to go back and reread!

And also, am gonna say it again... I love the way you write the bond between the twins, I just ABSOLUTLY ADORE IT!
(Maybe someday, I could badger you into writing a twin gen fic for me *is hopeful*)

Date: 2007-09-05 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Thank you!!

Oh no :( I'm sorry that's not clear. Fred absolutely knows about them. George isn't getting out of bed to 'hide' from Fred. Just to go meet him, and not be, you know, naked.

I don't know! Before I started writing TGO, I never thought I'd write twinfic. I'm just not funny/clever enough to write them. I'm totally faking it with this most of the time because George is an emotional, insecure wreck, so I can get away with it.

*hugs*

Date: 2007-09-05 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillicides.livejournal.com
Oh, oh, that was...unspeakably lovely. I love George using finding out who hurt Lee as the final push to be ready to get vulnerable with Lee. I'm not sure if I found the end a little upsetting cause George had to get out of bed, or faintly amusing cause Fred's that familiar with George (or thinks he is...). I'm not sure if I'm looking forward to the fallout from all this or not, part of me just wants to wrap George and Lee up in cotton wool and let them live in their bubble forever...

Date: 2007-09-05 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you read it.

I know, it was kind of a bummer to take them out of bed together. I just figured, there's really no way Fred would have found out about George getting into a fight and not go to his twin. Meddlesome brother. But it won't be too bad. ... er, I hope.

Thank you!

Date: 2007-09-05 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] love-tart.livejournal.com
I'm melted. That's it, totally and completely gone.

That was beyond amazing, Lee's patience, George's depserate need, just the two of them loving each other. So fantastic.

Oh can't wait to see the F/G interaction, you always write them so brilliantly.

*bows down to Maple, Queen of the Good Smut*

Date: 2007-09-05 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
*tackles you*

I'm thrilled to bits that it all worked for you. *is distracted by your pretty icon*

I'm excited about finishing this story. I've got a few more things that are left to show. 11 more smutlets and then its done!

Date: 2007-09-05 06:59 pm (UTC)
ext_76731: Painting of Ron by Elspethelf from LJ (Maple made me ship George/Lee)
From: [identity profile] oncelikeshari.livejournal.com
Yay Maple! George did it and it was all tender and angsty and beautiful and...MEEEEEEEEP!

You made me meep!

*twirls you*

Date: 2007-09-07 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Yay! she meeped! I made shari MEEP! :P

Date: 2007-09-05 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fitzette.livejournal.com
alaslkjfha'olsdjfj'lksadf;h!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love you!

Thanks, I needed this today.

Date: 2007-09-07 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Awww! thank you! I'm so glad you read it! :D

Date: 2007-09-05 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rose-starr.livejournal.com
Yes, after re-reading them all, I am 100% sure that this group is my favorite! George needed this emotional upheaval to realize how he felt, and then, for him to realize how much he loves Lee and that he was ready, finally ready, to give him everything ... *sigh*

This is so gorgeous! I still can't believe how much I love these!! Such a testament to your ability to pull me in!!

**hugs you**

Date: 2007-09-07 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Oh, cool! This is definitely my favorite 'set' too.

I'm so relieved that you 'get' the need for him to have these struggles and the emotional upheaval of it.

*happydance*

Date: 2007-09-05 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knic26.livejournal.com
These were all great! Thank you for continuing to share these lovely smutlets!

Date: 2007-09-07 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading them!! It means so much to me. :)

Date: 2007-09-06 12:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anise-anise.livejournal.com
I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this. Thanks so much for the fantastic read! I can't wait for more! *hugs*

Date: 2007-09-07 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Yay! Are you? I'm so glad to hear that. I'm so glad this little story found some readers. I appreciate that. :)

Date: 2007-09-06 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lnalvgd.livejournal.com
That was beautiful!

Lee took such care of his George! George was such the needy boyfriend...

*whimpers*

Just wonderful Maple! Exactly what your adoring fans have been waiting for. George's virginity!

Date: 2007-09-07 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
George utterly fell apart, didn't he? He had to be strong and witty and up beat and in 'hiding' for so long he finally just completely lost it.

I'm so glad. Thank you! :)

Date: 2007-09-06 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyclonejuliet.livejournal.com
oh wow! thankyou maple - I have been waiting for this,and I am glad that I did. So much to say, but again speechless.
huggles!

Date: 2007-09-07 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
You are so good to me. I really appreciate you following this story. *clings*

Date: 2007-09-06 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amieam.livejournal.com
You have made GLEE my favorite slash ship! If I remember right Fred and Ginny know at this point in the timeline, is that right?

I can't wait for more.

Date: 2007-09-07 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
*dances* Yay! (I won't tell H/R you said that. :P )

And you are right, both Fred and Ginny know. They will be telling Mr and Mrs Weasley next. Telling the brothers and Harry is portrayed in WYWY, but I'll show them shortly.

eeks!

Date: 2007-09-20 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nakeefeet.livejournal.com
YAY! It's a Maple table SIX-for-one day, and I'm only two weeks late in seeing it. :P

Just, wow, Maple.

Love how George thought of Fred, and knew he'd come to him.

“Sorry.” George said, seeing the tight-lipped annoyance on Lee’s face and then went downstairs to meet his brother.

Poor Lee. Somehow I'm not thinking he had Fred in mind for the "afterglow" portion of their evening. :D

Can't wait to see what happens with the rest of the family.

Date: 2007-09-30 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ms-worplesdon.livejournal.com
I just finished reading!!! This is great. I love seeing peripheral characters get fleshed out. I wibble for Lee's knee, and I'm glad that George finally gave it up. About time! I'm really looking forward to the coming out part. Again, I love your silent twin communication. It's completely awesome.

I must say I wasn't surprised that Charlie is a bit of a lush here- he drank me under the table last night when I showed up with the Copperknob. ;)

Understand that I rarely read anything but H/R and R/Sirius, but now coffee_n_cocoa's got me reading her Neville stuff, and now this. I'm being attacked from all sides!

I'm still not going to read H/Sev. So don't even try it missy!

Date: 2007-09-30 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
I so thrilled that you read this. This story is such a pet of mine. :D

Yeah, having Charlie be a bit of an arse was fun to write. It never makes a huge part of the story (either WYWY or TGO) but he does behave pretty badly here and there and undergoes some self awareness before its all over.

Copperknob *snort* ;)

Hee - I'm a real sucker for 'best mate' ships. Nothing holds a candle to H/R for me, but Dean/Seamus and George/Lee and some RL/SB are right up there. ... pretty much any Weasley/Gryffindor-boy combo I've learned to love.

I'm still not going to read H/Sev. So don't even try it missy!

Not a chance! Snape and Draco get plenty of love from the fandom, but I don't write them. (unless Ron's kicking Draco's arse, that, I write. :P )

Date: 2007-10-30 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shes-gone.livejournal.com
Fuck, I need a cigarette.

Oh, Fred. I do love that George knew he was coming.

Date: 2007-11-14 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doodle2707.livejournal.com
I think shaesmom said best a few chapters ago...

I second the *melted puddle of goo"

I will be sleeping with a smile on my face tonight!

Date: 2007-11-15 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Hee - this whole 'scene' was actually the very first thing I had written for this fic and it sat on my computer for about a year before I got TGO set up to this spot.

(I'll probably miss a few of your comments here and there, but I'm trying to catch up.) :)

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