fics_by_maple: (George/Lee)
fics_by_maple ([personal profile] fics_by_maple) wrote2007-02-10 05:07 pm

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For my [profile] 50_smutlets  claim, that belongs in my Within You, Without You universe.

Title: 17. Kneeling
Author: Maple
Pairing: George/Lee
Word Count: 529
Rating: NC-17

My Table



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George rotated them so that they could see themselves in the floor length mirror along the wall. The stark light overhead forgave nothing, every scar and freckle between them clearly visible. Both men stood together unclothed, soft and vulnerable and it made a striking picture.


“Now tell me what you see,” George whispered into Lee’s ear as he stood behind him. He closed his eyes and kissed Lee’s temple.

“Same,” Lee said with a vague, annoyed shrug.

“No. Look again, mate, what do you see in the mirror now?” George began rubbing his hand up and down Lee’s torso while he kissed up and down the side of Lee’s neck.

“I, I see us. You kissing me.”

“That’s getting closer.” George smiled against Lee’s shoulder as he slowly moved around to his front, leaving kisses along Lee’s collarbone, leaving his back to the mirror. “What else?”

Lee’s eyes fluttered as he continued to watch their reflection.

“I see your pink arse.”

George let out a breathy chuckle at Lee’s dry hint of humor.

“Go on. There’s more there besides my nekkid arse.”

George lowered onto his knees before Lee, hugging his torso and nuzzling Lee’s stomach with the side of his face.

“Uh, I see you … holding me.”

“There we go. Now you’re on to it.”

Lee moved his hands for the first time from his sides and touched George’s hair.

“I see that you’re here with me even though it’s difficult for you.”

George nodded, ghosting his lips and hot breath down the line of Lee’s hip, feeling Lee beginning to harden as his cock brush against George’s neck.

“You’re worth it,” George muttered.

George stood up again and grasped their stirring cocks together and stroked them both to full hardness while Lee watched their mirror.

“Keep watching. What else?”

Being quick with his hands, George slicked himself with lube from a nearby drawer while Lee turned and placed his hands on the counter in front of him. Sliding his cock between Lee’s arse cheeks, he teased.

“If you want me to do it, you have to tell me what you see.”

Lee arched back against him instinctively and his voice wavered before he spoke.

“I s-see how confident a lover you’ve become. How gorgeous you are.”

Gently biting into the sun etched onto the back of Lee’s shoulder George pushed forward into the taut warmth.

Lee groaned, keeping his eyes on the sight of George slowly fucking him in the mirror.

“You took care of me when I needed you.”

“Yes,” George grunted, reaching around to take Lee’s cock in hand while thrusting faster until they were both close to the edge of climax. “’s not everything, Jordan. There’s more there.” George was struggling against his body’s desire to meet that peak.

Lee reached up and cupped George’s face and stilled his cheek against his own. Their eyes met in the mirror.

“I see how good we look together. How good we are together. And how much you love me.”

George smiled and turned his head to kiss Lee’s cheek.

That’s it. I love you. You see that, now?”

“I see it now. I feel it.”

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See, Lee has demons too. These poor boys have had such a difficult, stressful time, but there will be fun and silliness for them in the future. Thank you!!
ETA - now with art by [livejournal.com profile] reallycorking!!
ext_76731: Painting of Ron by Elspethelf from LJ (Maple made me ship George/Lee)

[identity profile] oncelikeshari.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 01:29 am (UTC)(link)
Ah they are so perfect in their lovey ways and their sexy ways and their angsty ways.

I love them even more!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad! :D

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] lego2.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
*Sigh* They really are fabulous together, these two. Mirrors are very hard and unforgiving, glad George was there for him.

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes! You phrased that perfectly.

Thank you for commenting. :D

[identity profile] mrsquizzical.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
The stark light overhead forgave nothing, every scar and freckle between them clearly visible. Both men stood together unclothed, soft and vulnerable and it made a striking picture.

::thankyou::

“I see that you’re here with me even though it’s difficult for you.”

these boys are perfect, maple. honestly.

Lee groaned, keeping his eyes on the sight of George slowly fucking him in the mirror.

*wants to be that mirror*

“That’s it. I love you. You see that, now?”

“I see it now. I feel it.”


::oh::

maple, you're outdoing yourself with these. they are going to be classics.


[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
You like naked men in a mirror, eh? Hee.

I wasn't terribly happy about how these turned out but you made feel rather nice about it. Thanks for that! *hugs*

[identity profile] cyclonejuliet.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
Oh this is so lovely!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh thank you so much!

[identity profile] rose-starr.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! That was so beautiful!!! Way to go, George - make him believe it!!

Fabulous!!! :)

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah? Cool!

I feel a kinda bad that Lee was having a little psychological melt down and George's response was to fuck him :0 -but he really meant well!

[identity profile] nakeefeet.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 05:41 am (UTC)(link)
*insert cheesy advertising gimick*

That was just *sigh* beautiful! Each of the boys is exactly what the other needs to overcome their personal demons and grow together.

Love it!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:24 pm (UTC)(link)
cheesy advertising gimmick? Hee.

Yes - that's it exactly. They complement each other and pick the other up when he's down.

Thank you!

[identity profile] lnalvgd.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah...Maple! You make me wibble with these two! They are the perfect alternative OTP for me!

I love seeing George grow more confident with his skills as a lover. I love seeing Lee be vulnerable, and then finally turning that vulnerability over to George.

You are made of awesome, Maple, just plain awesome!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-11 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
That's so cool to hear - thank you!

I've been wanting to show Lee as having his vulnerabilities too, but its taken me awhile.

[identity profile] owens-mom.livejournal.com 2007-02-16 03:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! That was just wonderful. Guh.

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-16 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, thank you so much!

[identity profile] unomesowell.livejournal.com 2007-02-16 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
All that taking care of George emotionally made Lee safe enough to be taken care of physically but it works both ways, too. I love that!

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-21 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
I love that you gave it that much thought. Yes, they're both more vulnerable in ways they might not have been otherwise. They trade off their strengths and weaknesses.

*has give this waaayyy too much thought*

Thanks! ;)

[identity profile] unomesowell.livejournal.com 2007-02-21 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
I have to give it this much thought. How else can I justify such an "off the beaten path" ship? Its just so perfect this way!

[identity profile] snarkhunter.livejournal.com 2007-02-18 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! Hot and sweet and just awwwww all at once.

I never know how to leave appropriate feedback for these, b/c my predominant reaction is as follows: *FLAIL*

[identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com 2007-02-21 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
Well it means SO much to me that you take the time to read and even more that you take the time to comment. Even if is for 'flailing'. :D

Thanks!

[identity profile] fitzette.livejournal.com 2007-06-27 06:51 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, sweet George. Quick with his hands. *sniggers*

[identity profile] shes-gone.livejournal.com 2007-08-13 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
God, this is gorgeous. The images (!) and the emotions, *sigh*