I love how you have portrayed your characters. I loved that Ginny walked away from him the first time (That's my girl!). And I giggled all the way through Harry's 'less pure' thoughts and observations.
"a niffler with a hard-on" I think I woke up all the people in my block of flats laughing over that one! And that wasn't the only good line you have come up with. (But I am being pathetically lazy and commenting on all 3 chapters in one review.)
I am enjoying the questions you are raising too. Too many fanfic writers try and over explain things, which takes away the readers pleasure. You are dropping the hints subtley and casually. It is working really well. I can't wait to find out what on earth could have happened with George, who killed Hedwig (curse them), and what all the messages in Diagon Alley are about.
Excellent Maple! I can't wait for more! (Holding you to it that it will be Monday ... or earlier... wink wink nudge nudge)
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Date: 2006-08-05 05:02 pm (UTC)I am thoroughly loving this.
I love how you have portrayed your characters. I loved that Ginny walked away from him the first time (That's my girl!). And I giggled all the way through Harry's 'less pure' thoughts and observations.
"a niffler with a hard-on" I think I woke up all the people in my block of flats laughing over that one! And that wasn't the only good line you have come up with. (But I am being pathetically lazy and commenting on all 3 chapters in one review.)
I am enjoying the questions you are raising too. Too many fanfic writers try and over explain things, which takes away the readers pleasure. You are dropping the hints subtley and casually. It is working really well. I can't wait to find out what on earth could have happened with George, who killed Hedwig (curse them), and what all the messages in Diagon Alley are about.
Excellent Maple! I can't wait for more! (Holding you to it that it will be Monday ... or earlier... wink wink nudge nudge)