ext_21537 ([identity profile] pghpatronus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fics_by_maple 2006-08-07 07:49 am (UTC)

This is really good. You've captured the beauty of Harry's love for Ron so well with this story. Cruel angst makes for a great story.

“You left me…” “I’m sorry.”
This brought the first tear.

“Shh, it’s ok, Harry, I’ve got you,” I hear him say quietly over the pounding in my head. “I’m here now. I’ll never leave you again.”
This brought several more.

“Oh thank Godric Gryffindor for your cock, Harry Potter,”
Great line! And I sure do!

“You are gorgeous.” I’ll never buy into his praise of my cock compared to his, but he seems to believe what he says, and that’s enough for me.
I'm glad he believes it!

Oh yeah, the sex. WAY HOT. It's realistic. You understand guys and our parts. Way cool.

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