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Title: Taking Liberty With Happy Endings
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Word Count: 1329
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slash, Deathly Hallows Spoilers
A/N or Prompt: Written for the Deathly Hallows Slashy Epilogue Challenge at [livejournal.com profile] harry_and_ron.
My thanks to [livejournal.com profile] mrsquizzical and [livejournal.com profile] gwen1170 for the help.

I’m not entirely certain this qualifies or even makes a lot of sense, but here you go!




~^~

Ron joined Harry where he sat on a fallen tree trunk, blown over long ago by the tempestuous winds that blew up the cliff side by Shell Cottage. Ron followed Harry’s gaze where he watched the family and friends gathered there.

“So …?” Ron’s open-ended question lingered. “What should we do now, mate?”

“I guess it depends. There’s something I haven’t told you yet.”

Ron huffed. “There’s a surprise.”

But in spite of his sarcasm, he turned, raising a leg to straddle the trunk, facing Harry and edging a bit closer. “Tell me, then,” he said, looking hopeful.

“Ok … I saw something else when I was … you know?” Harry shifted and Ron frowned. Neither was comfortable with acknowledging Harry’s recent death.

“Alright, go on.” Ron nudged Harry’s knee with the back of his hand, but he didn’t retract it. He rubbed the outside seam of Harry’s jeans with his knuckles while Harry spoke.

He told Ron of the future life nineteen years ahead of them. Ron’s cool blue eyes met his with understanding warmth each time he gave him quick, furtive glances during the tale. When Harry finished, he finally looked up and Ron’s ginger eyebrows knitted and the look of compassion dissolved into a boggled scowl.

“You dreamed all of that?” Ron said.

“No, it wasn’t a dream. It was real.”

“But you said King’s Cross was white and clean and stuff. That’s not real.”

“Well no, that part wasn’t real, obviously, that was all in my head. But what will happen later, that was real.”

Ron gave him that look again and drew a deep breath. “So, are you trying to tell me that’s what you came back for?” He was clearly trying to be Harry’s strategist here, but the tone of hurt in his voice was still evident. “To marry my sister and be a dad and give your kids insane names?

No. I came back for … everything.” Harry waved his hands around indicating the world at large. “I couldn’t just leave everyone … you, to him.”

Ron was clearly not interested in dealing the more serious issue at hand.

“Only you’re barmy enough to experience the ‘here after’ in King’s Cross Station of all places!”

“Well I wouldn’t have stayed in King’s Cross. … I don’t think. I could have taken a train to someplace cooler, you know.”

“You couldn’t have, you were naked!”

“I wasn’t always naked. I found clothes!”

“And besides, you already said there weren’t any trains.”

“That’s because it was metaphorical!” Harry snapped, his exasperation mounting. “It’s where I crossed into the magical world and began my life as a wizard. I was on a journey, get it? And I had to figure out what direction I wanted to go in.”

“And what kind of ‘after life’ could you have in the Underground anyway? What, were you going to eat from a fish and chips cart forever? Raid the Starbucks trolley for the rest of time? That’s a rotten paradise.”

“Will you stop it?” Harry poked Ron in the ribs. “This isn’t funny! I’m trying to tell you about the life we can have.”

Frustrated, Harry stood, but before he could take a step, Ron grabbed his arm and yanked him back down hard, so that he was sitting on the tree between Ron’s legs, his back to Ron’s chest. Then Ron’s arms were around him, his fists clenching where they crossed over Harry’s chest.

“I do get what you are saying, Harry,” Ron said sharply and low into Harry’s ear. “I heard every word. How you want for us to go over there,” he shifted their shoulders so they could see the people in the distance in Bill’s garden, “and get together with Hermione and Ginny and have normal lives and make babies. … I get it, OK?” He released Harry and sat back. “But you’ll forgive me if I’m not thrilled about you choosing my sister over …us.” The last word he muttered quietly.

“Us?” Harry turned to face Ron, only inch apart.

“I dunno.” Ron shrugged. “Sometimes I thought maybe … guess I was wrong.”

“You’re not wrong. Sometimes …” but Harry couldn’t voice it either. There were so many moments when he’d been forced to think of what he loved the most in the world, and wasn’t it always Ron? “But that’s not it,” Harry continued. “Ron, I had to tell you. It’s not just my future. It’s yours too. You have a right to choose.” Harry looked over at the people gathered in garden. Most were coupled off into tidy pairs, gazing adoringly at baby Teddy. “We’re happy, our future selves. We have good lives and we’re still best mates. That’ll never change.”

“Right. So you have to choose between finally getting the family you never had or. … I can’t give you Little James and Little Lily – morbid as fuck by the way - and Albus Severus.” Ron rolled his eyes and fake retched. “You must be wrong, because if we’re still mates in the future I’d never let you name one of your kids ‘ASP’ – honestly!”

Harry reached out and aimlessly took a handful of Ron’s t-shirt in his hand.

“I just wanted to give you a choice, Ron! To tell you that I know you’re going to be happy! I can’t promise that life with me would be that easy.”

“Life with you has always been a picnic, has it?” Ron snarked.

Harry sighed. Ron’s fingers began slither over Harry’s hand where he gripped his t-shirt. He rubbed over faint scars and circled his knuckles and then ran his thumb over the edge of Harry’s thumbnail.

Their eyes met and Harry raised his eyebrows acknowledging the attention Ron was bestowing on his hand. Ron let out a snuffled, breathy snort. He let go but Harry grabbed his fingers and held them.

They looked at their clasped hands and both blushed, unable to meet each other’s eyes.

“I guess it’s stupid to consider this. I mean we’ve never even - we don’t know for sure if-”

Ron pounced. In the twinkle of an eye, Harry was flung off the log out of sight of the house, with Ron on top of him.

He yelped and wrestled on instinct as they’d always done. Ron was chuckling too and he was focused on Harry’s eyes with a fiery intensity that took Harry’s breath away.

He stopped trying to throw Ron off then. Instead he relaxed, for the first time like this, and let Ron’s weight settle onto him. Ron gave into the closeness as well and became heavier, letting his lithe body press onto Harry’s, touching solidly from thigh to chest.

“I thought you knew when the Horcrux showed you what I was afraid of,” Ron said quietly.

“That you were afraid Hermione fancied me?”

“No. That you fancied Hermione.”

“But I told you then, she’s like my sister.”

Ron nodded. “Yeah, I get it now.”

Harry was breathing deeply through parted lips when Ron dipped his head and pressed his mouth against Harry’s.

They separated, watching each other and breathing heavily into each other’s mouths before kissing again, longer this time, teasing with the slight touch of wet, curious tongues.

They parted once more, looking for renewed assurance. Their pounding hearts thundered against their joined chests, which confirmed the unasked question. They dove into a kiss again with unashamed open mouths, pulling each other closer with handfuls of hair and clutched clothing. Harry felt the rasp of stubble along Ron’s upper lip, a thrilling texture he’d never felt during a snog before.

It was perfect.

“Yeah?” Ron breathed the question.

“Oh, yeah.” Harry answered.

“So, we can just choose a different future?” Ron asked, nuzzling his nose along Harry’s cheekbone.

“Exactly. We’ll just, pretend like we never knew about the other future.” Harry turned to seek another kiss.

And all was well.

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Date: 2007-07-29 02:48 pm (UTC)
ext_60966: (hp/rw)
From: [identity profile] gina87.livejournal.com
Perfect! Love it!

Date: 2007-07-30 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Lovely! Thank you!

Date: 2007-07-29 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purplethings.livejournal.com
Aaah so That's what the epilogue was for ;D

Very nice and lovely- I may print it out and glue it into the back of my spare copy of DH hahaha!

Date: 2007-07-30 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Hee - yeah, I know. I kind of stuck a wrench into it and stirred things up. :P

Thank you !

Date: 2007-07-29 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-crystalle432.livejournal.com
ok, this is the new epilogue. it's been decided.

you write kissing very well. i forgot how good this fandom is at writing.

"Life with you has always been a picnic, has it?" Ron snarked.

your ron is a+. spot on ic. and "snark" as a verb. love it.

and all was well.

Date: 2007-07-30 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Yay - what nice things to say - thank you!

*clings to my Ron* Anybody who likes my Ron is a peach in my book. thank you so very much! :)

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From: [identity profile] kerryblaze.livejournal.com - Date: 2007-08-06 09:53 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2007-07-29 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celandineb.livejournal.com
Hee, I love this way of letting them choose what future they want. The wing of a butterfly...

Date: 2007-07-30 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Indeed! :)

Oh thank you so much for reading.

Date: 2007-07-29 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] for-a-fantasy.livejournal.com
*grins* FANTASTIC. Perfect like that kiss. ;D

....someone should really start a wizard rock band called Albus Severus and the Bad Names (lol)

Date: 2007-07-30 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Oh good! Since there wasn't smut, I was hoping the kiss would be powerful enough. thank you!

Date: 2007-07-29 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] letmypidgeonsgo.livejournal.com
*squeals with delight* i choose to believe, now, that teh epilogue was an extension of harry's time in the in-between (cos omg he did say it looked like king's cross, didn't he?!) and that the possibilities are still wide-open for anything to happen long-term!!!

*smushes you*

Date: 2007-07-30 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Ha - yeah, hence the title of this fic 'taking liberties ...'
But smooshing together the King's Cross stuff sure helped. I have to find a way to keep writing them!

Thank you! :)

Date: 2007-07-29 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] compos-dementis.livejournal.com
Wow... That made me cry, goddammit.

*wipes away tears* You're a brilliant writer, and I'll be happy to pretend that this happened instead of the *other* ending. The other one was corny... and yes, "Albus Severus"... What the fuck?

Date: 2007-07-30 05:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Really? Oh, *blush* I so glad you liked it. :)

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From: [identity profile] compos-dementis.livejournal.com - Date: 2007-07-30 05:21 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2007-07-29 11:30 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] capitu
this is ... as many other said, perfect!!!! <333

Date: 2007-07-30 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Oh cool! Thank you so much. I never would have attempted the epilogue thing if you hadn't challenged us with it.

Date: 2007-07-30 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fuqmeharry.livejournal.com
To me...this is what happened. Fuck the epilogue. I loved this!

Date: 2007-07-30 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
ha! Well, cool - I'm glad. Thank you1

Date: 2007-07-30 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wordsweweave.livejournal.com
You have written an amazing epilogue. Harry trying to reason with a cheeky Ron!

Date: 2007-07-30 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Aww, I was really hoping it would be ok, I'm glad you liked it.

I just love Harry and Ron snarking at each other :D

Date: 2007-07-30 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darklymoonlit.livejournal.com
Wow. This was just... stunning. Sweet and funny and with an appropriately goofy Ron. Love like whoa.

Date: 2007-08-01 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
My goodness - what lovely things to say. I really appreciate - thank you!

Date: 2007-07-30 09:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bizarity.livejournal.com
Ahhh. Total genius. And the Harry/Ron section of fandom need have no more epilogue problems ever again. Lovely.

Date: 2007-07-30 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] candycane7.livejournal.com
OMG!

*loves*

I like this "all was well" better. =D

Date: 2007-08-01 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Hee - oh cool -I'm so glad you liked it! :)

Date: 2007-07-31 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crumplehornedki.livejournal.com
do you feel better now?

very sweet

Date: 2007-08-01 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
:D

Well, when [livejournal.com profile] harry_and_ron issues a challenge I can't NOT do it! :P hee - thanks!

Date: 2007-07-31 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shes-gone.livejournal.com
Completely perfect. *sigh*

Date: 2007-08-01 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much!

Date: 2007-07-31 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerryblaze.livejournal.com
I really loved this! And think the spin you put on the original epilogue was brilliant!

Date: 2007-08-01 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Cool! Thanks for reading - while on vacation no less! :D

x-post request

Date: 2007-08-01 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arabesqueno2.livejournal.com
< /cue automated message because after writing the same thing at least 5 times, it gets tiring XD >

Hope that this isn't considered as spam, but I've got a community that's just been freshly made called [livejournal.com profile] thedhcrapilogue, in which I try to archive any fics related to 'After-Chapter-36', '19-years-before', the "real" epilogue, '19-years-later', and/or alternate endings to DH.

I would like to ask permission to either link this story there, or you could just post it: you don't even have to join the community.

If you decide to post it yourself, there are fanfiction submission rules (http://community.livejournal.com/thedhcrapilogue/1941.html#cutid1) and a format (http://community.livejournal.com/thedhcrapilogue/1941.html#cutid2) to follow.

But if you would like to decline, that's perfectly alright!

Thank you for your time!

Re: x-post request

Date: 2007-08-01 03:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Hello - I have looked at the community, and if you would like to link to my story, you have my permission. ... Er - you know, as long as its not preceded with 'for crappy fic click here'! :P

Thanks!

Re: x-post request

From: [identity profile] arabesqueno2.livejournal.com - Date: 2007-08-02 03:40 am (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2007-08-01 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aniwde.livejournal.com
I've read a few 'what if the epilogue was a bit longer' fics, but this is definitely an original take on it. And really, the whole ethereal Kings Cross followed by the happy-ever-after ending was sooo cheesy - having Ron take the piss was the perfect reaction! I just adore what you've written here - thank you so much for sharing it! :D

Date: 2007-08-01 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
:D I'm thrilled to hear that. I was wondering if I was taking this idea a bit too far, but so far people seem to 'get' it. I'm so glad.

Yeah, Ron would totally give him a hard time! Hee. Thank you!

Taking Liberty with Happy Ending (h/r)

Date: 2007-08-01 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenpan.livejournal.com
aww! I really liked it. it made me yay! :)

Re: Taking Liberty with Happy Ending (h/r)

Date: 2007-08-02 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
I love making people 'yay' - cool! Thank you!

Date: 2007-08-02 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tjs-whatnot.livejournal.com
It was all a dream? I KNEW IT!! Thanks!

Date: 2007-08-02 05:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
LOL at your icon. No, no, it wasn't a dream - it was real. They just chose to to ignore it. ;)

Date: 2007-08-02 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpuckle.livejournal.com
*melts*

I absolutely adore every one of your stories that I've ever read.

xxx

Date: 2007-08-05 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Wow - that's a really nice thing to say!

I want to hide after posting half of what I write, so that really is appreciated. Thank you!

Date: 2007-08-06 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shygryf.livejournal.com
wonderful! I love all the creative ways of getting around the epilauge to get to the cannon!

Date: 2007-08-16 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Really late here, sorry!

But thank you for reading! I tried to do something different with it. Ah, well.

Date: 2007-08-06 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerryblaze.livejournal.com
I loved how you worked in the real epilogue.

This here...
“You’re not wrong. Sometimes …” but Harry couldn’t voice it either. There were so many moments when he’d been forced to think of what he loved the most in the world, and wasn’t it always Ron? “But that’s not it,” Harry continued. “Ron, I had to tell you. It’s not just my future. It’s yours too. You have a right to choose.” Harry looked over at the people gathered in garden. Most were coupled off into tidy pairs, gazing adoringly at baby Teddy. “We’re happy, our future selves. We have good lives and we’re still best mates. That’ll never change.”

“Right. So you have to choose between finally getting the family you never had or. … I can’t give you Little James and Little Lily – morbid as fuck by the way - and Albus Severus.” Ron rolled his eyes and fake retched. “You must be wrong, because if we’re still mates in the future I’d never let you name one of your kids ‘ASP’ – honestly!”


All of that was perfect!

Date: 2007-08-16 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Clearly, very late in comments, here, sorry!

I'm glad you liked that segment. Harry's being very heavily serious, and Ron just skirts around the heavy stuff with sarcasm. :P

Thanks! *sigh*

Date: 2007-08-06 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xedra.livejournal.com
oh my...

all I can do is *squeeeeeeeeee*!!!

Date: 2007-08-16 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Really late here, now sorry - but THANK YOU! hee.

Date: 2007-08-07 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cassiopeia13.livejournal.com
aww that was nice! I liked it

Date: 2007-08-16 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fics-by-maple.livejournal.com
Really late now here, sorry! But thank you very much!!
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